tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3875745453255512721.post8485711201258965924..comments2023-06-22T21:39:16.705+12:00Comments on Leoden Year 7: "The Toy Shop on Zip Zap Avenue"PES Bloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15662065130735974733noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3875745453255512721.post-39682598887689217172009-12-02T16:42:59.429+13:002009-12-02T16:42:59.429+13:00Another good piece you have written here Leoden.
...Another good piece you have written here Leoden. <br /><br />Its great how you wrote about being excited yet nervous at the same time! Makes the reader imagine themselves in your shoes. <br /><br />I really love your use of similes! So many adjectives used too, good on you!<br /><br />Dianella<br /><br />PS. I thoroughly enjoyed watching the production too!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3875745453255512721.post-82165475000332342772009-12-02T10:49:44.041+13:002009-12-02T10:49:44.041+13:00Hey tiki.
Its me Victoria. i really like your si...Hey tiki. <br /><br />Its me Victoria. i really like your singing. it was great. hope to see you around. Bye.<br /><br />VictoriaVictorianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3875745453255512721.post-10908394110464422362009-12-02T10:47:53.169+13:002009-12-02T10:47:53.169+13:00Hey leoden
Its me victoria. I liked that song and...Hey leoden<br /><br />Its me victoria. I liked that song and i saw you playing the recorder. i bet you that you had fun. See you around. bye.<br /><br />victoriavictorianoreply@blogger.com